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My new real resolution:
Drawing more characters doing sports :D
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Sequel to [i]Unusual Vacation[/i], by [[confusedraven]]. [[dave_(confusedraven)|Dave]] moves to be closer to his boyfriend [[jay_(confusedraven)|Jay]], but complications ensue. Also features a new character, the [[female]] [[rabbit]] [[mia_(confusedraven)|Mia]].
h4. Unusual Vacation
A mostly gay story about a few boys coming from very different cultures. It's about them exploring their customs and desires, and also doing their self-discoveries from different aspects.
* "Unusual Vacation: Hard Beginning":/pools/23122
* "Unusual Vacation 2: What are friends for":/pools/23170
* "Unusual Vacation 3: The wolf and the sheep":/pools/24800
* "Unusual Vacation 4: Chasing with shadows":/pools/28263
* "Unusual Vacation 5: A taste of a new world":/pools/34361
* "Unusual Vacation: Epilogue":/pools/42752
h4. Everyday Greyness
Please note that this is a different story from Unusual vacation. There are different emotions to express, and also different kinds of bonging, so despite many of the characters are the same, you might have a controversial feelings about the events.
This story is still about love, but also about the lack of it. There are false expectations, depression, and getting over it, while at different points it might be still playful and uplifting.
Continue reading at your own risk.
* "Everyday Greyness":/pools/49036
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[quote]"g27d":/users/2216339 said: I hope Dave and Jay reconcile and I think they might eventually - that said, bi is a thing and I think it is really cool that he is exploring that part of himself. There are no rules here on what relationships should be like other than those we put on them. [/quote] I feel like this gonna be a thing were Jay goes to talk to Dave but sees him with Mia and Dave notices how sad Jay is without him and so dave stops meeting with Mia and gets back with Jay and they talk it out that is what I am at least hoping for.
i wonder is mia is a virgin?
[quote]"jtlock":/users/928018 said: This breaks my heart. So much character development for him coming out as gay and now this…? Nooooo! [/quote] Coming out as bisexual* Again, people keep ignoring the bisexuals.
Horse cock problems, am I right?
[quote]"confusedraven":/users/747313 said: I expected some drama in the comments, so I'm perfectly fine with it. As you said I still welcome any opinion doesn't matter if it's positive or negative, but for everyone, please note that we are still in an early page of a journey. About the plot: Don't worry, I'm shaping it the way it was intended, and I accept if it's not everyones cup of tea, but there is a pattern some of you'll notice (or noticed already), so there might be more in this story what you've expected... or not. :) [/quote] Annnd now I have to go see if i can find the pattern XD excited to see the next page
[quote]"nephyte":/users/31567 said: My goodness ya'll need to relax here. Let raven tell the story they want too. You're more then welcome to an opinion and to give constructive criticism, but as somebody who has written stories before, seeing all this negative reactions based on one or two panels can be disheartening to an artist. Might make them change from telling the story they want to, to telling a story they don't like nor wanted, just to keep the negative reactors happy. Raven please tell the story the way you have envisioned, I for one am quite interested to see how our emotionally hurt horsie-boy handles it. I been on both sides of this myself for real, either around people it happened to or being part of it myself, and I cannot wait to see how this unfolds in full. ^_^ [/quote] I expected some drama in the comments, so I'm perfectly fine with it. As you said I still welcome any opinion doesn't matter if it's positive or negative, but for everyone, please note that we are still in an early page of a journey. About the plot: Don't worry, I'm shaping it the way it was intended, and I accept if it's not everyones cup of tea, but there is a pattern some of you'll notice (or noticed already), so there might be more in this story what you've expected... or not. :)
My goodness ya'll need to relax here. Let raven tell the story they want too. You're more then welcome to an opinion and to give constructive criticism, but as somebody who has written stories before, seeing all this negative reactions based on one or two panels can be disheartening to an artist. Might make them change from telling the story they want to, to telling a story they don't like nor wanted, just to keep the negative reactors happy. Raven please tell the story the way you have envisioned, I for one am quite interested to see how our emotionally hurt horsie-boy handles it. I been on both sides of this myself for real, either around people it happened to or being part of it myself, and I cannot wait to see how this unfolds in full. ^_^
For heaven's sake, everyone just calm down! I'm guessing Jay's not written out of the story yet. After all, Dave hasn't even talked to him, and the author has gone so far as to depict Jay in a state of deep regret and sadness. So, I'm guessing all is not lost to getting back into Dave's heart. Have faith, readers.
[quote]"tibe19kilo":/users/445760 said: Didn't Jay cheat on him without his consent that started all of this? [/quote] Does one have to ask for consent before cheating?
[quote]"danonymous":/users/2496168 said: I REALLY don't like the way things are developing. I would totally accept an open relationship, but it would have to be with Jay's consent! [/quote] Didn't Jay cheat on him without his consent that started all of this?
[quote]"thefantasticboy":/users/755913 said: Please create a Patreon with a few preview pages. I'd definitely pay. [/quote] I would sign up for a Patreon, but there is no need to wait for it. Just follow the kofi link above and buy CR a few cups to help fuel his late night drawing sessions. :)
[quote]"danonymous":/users/2496168 said: I REALLY don't like the way things are developing. I would totally accept an open relationship, but it would have to be with Jay's consent! [/quote] Could be Dave’s way of leveling the playing field. If he wants Jay to commit, its better to come up with “so, I can find other interested people too… I’ve got this nympho bunny after me now. Just tell me what you want to do: we can get serious, we can stay open or we can just be friends, but we have to be honest about it.”
[quote]"thefantasticboy":/users/755913 said: Please create a Patreon with a few preview pages. I'd definitely pay. [/quote] actually yeah, it would be a very good way to fund it + i guarantee you people would pay. I think it would have to be a subscribestar or smth tho, patreon is pretty iffy with younger content.
I hope Dave and Jay reconcile and I think they might eventually - that said, bi is a thing and I think it is really cool that he is exploring that part of himself. There are no rules here on what relationships should be like other than those we put on them.
Please create a Patreon with a few preview pages. I'd definitely pay.
I love this comic so much because it makes me feel
[quote]"danonymous":/users/2496168 said: I REALLY don't like the way things are developing. I would totally accept an open relationship, but it would have to be with Jay's consent! [/quote] yeah but jay was caught red handed cheating on dave basically, it breaks my heart because jay and dave were such a great couple but imagine how dave feels now, he opened up the most he ever had for jay and jay hurt him in a way that doesnt heal immediately. It makes sense daves trying to move on in a sense.
[quote]"arknoodler":/users/214937 said: Hell yeah <3 [/quote] [quote]"cornychocofresh":/users/768781 said: nooooooo [/quote] Basicaly the responses I expected ^^
nooooooo
Hell yeah <3