I like how the story is going.

Every time I see a new page I always just end up kind of sad for the poor boy. Even though it's just fiction, I really do hope that it ends well for him.

[quote]"privvy":/users/253265 said: the story is, for the most part, fully laid out.And I wont be changing anything regardless of how people feel about it. So i wouldnt worry about me. it has been fun reading all the comments. some of you are really good at guessing what happens next [/quote] I cannot wait to see what you're cooking up! Keep up the great work as I am already excited for the next page!

[quote]"privvy":/users/253265 said: the story is, for the most part, fully laid out.And I wont be changing anything regardless of how people feel about it. So i wouldnt worry about me. it has been fun reading all the comments. some of you are really good at guessing what happens next [/quote] ye ye it's been a very fun read. the villain is great so far and I look forward to seeing how it plays out.

Miguel's expressions are cute in this one. I noticed he doesn't have tears in his eyes. Suppose he's warming up to Keta?

[quote]"closetedfurry":/users/484013 said: Reading through these comments makes me just want wish Privvy the best of luck. We're going to be a tough if not impossible group to satisfy fully. Lots of differing opinions about how we'd like to see the story go... I hope that you choose to do whatever it is that [i]you[/i] want. I'm quite invested in these two and am excited to see where you choose to take them! [/quote] the story is, for the most part, fully laid out.And I wont be changing anything regardless of how people feel about it. So i wouldnt worry about me. it has been fun reading all the comments. some of you are really good at guessing what happens next

Reading through these comments makes me just want wish Privvy the best of luck. We're going to be a tough if not impossible group to satisfy fully. Lots of differing opinions about how we'd like to see the story go... I hope that you choose to do whatever it is that [i]you[/i] want. I'm quite invested in these two and am excited to see where you choose to take them!

We finished our plot Finally It's time for mouse rape

[quote]"waffles_ii":/users/1781478 said: sexually assaulted him on those first two pages iirc [/quote] ahhhh yes right you are!

Hush Miguel, this isn’t for you, let the Lady enjoy herself.

No need to by shy boyo, she has literally already molested you

[quote]"weaselsmasher":/users/284358 said: Keta is a far more broken person than even she realizes. If there is going to be redemption of any sort for her, it will have to start with internalizing what she [i][b]did[/b][/i] and that her performative mothering is only making it worse for everyone... including for herself. The question is the extent to which Miguel will have any interest whatsoever in assisting with that redemption, or whether his role is to dig the grave. Is there anything, anything at all in Keta worth saving? And if so, how can Miguel be realistically convinced of that? The only path to that I see is Keta having a moment of clarity, having an utterly devastating meltdown into self-loathing, and Miguel's better nature having sympathy that is undeserved but may be granted anyway. We need to see more about Miguel to see who he really is, beyond his current status of "victim". [/quote] I'm personally curious to see her backstory. Something about her last words to Miguel's mother makes me feel it's not the first time they've encountered each other.

[quote]"weaselsmasher":/users/284358 said: Keta is a far more broken person than even she realizes. If there is going to be redemption of any sort for her, it will have to start with internalizing what she [i][b]did[/b][/i] and that her performative mothering is only making it worse for everyone... including for herself. The question is the extent to which Miguel will have any interest whatsoever in assisting with that redemption, or whether his role is to dig the grave. Is there anything, anything at all in Keta worth saving? And if so, how can Miguel be realistically convinced of that? The only path to that I see is Keta having a moment of clarity, having an utterly devastating meltdown into self-loathing, and Miguel's better nature having sympathy that is undeserved but may be granted anyway. We need to see more about Miguel to see who he really is, beyond his current status of "victim". [/quote] I do not want her to be redeemed. I want both of our leads to get worse.

[quote]"tyree403":/users/23467 said: Here’s another terrifying thing you need to keep in mind: Miguel was knocked out before being abducted, never knowing for sure if his mom is still alive. In his perspective, he cannot rely on Keta to be telling him the truth. (Unless he’s dumb) For all he knows, Miguel’s mother could be raped and then brutally murdered, and he’d have no idea. And it’s probably why he didn’t ask Keta if his mom is okay. He’d rather be ignorant than to trust her words. [/quote] oooo another very good point!

[quote]"weaselsmasher":/users/284358 said: Keta is a far more broken person than even she realizes. If there is going to be redemption of any sort for her, it will have to start with internalizing what she [i][b]did[/b][/i] and that her performative mothering is only making it worse for everyone... including for herself. The question is the extent to which Miguel will have any interest whatsoever in assisting with that redemption, or whether his role is to dig the grave. Is there anything, anything at all in Keta worth saving? And if so, how can Miguel be realistically convinced of that? The only path to that I see is Keta having a moment of clarity, having an utterly devastating meltdown into self-loathing, and Miguel's better nature having sympathy that is undeserved but may be granted anyway. We need to see more about Miguel to see who he really is, beyond his current status of "victim". [/quote] we'll see what happens but, if I am being honest, I am much more interested in her facing justice/ miguel getting revenge than seeing any kind of redemption for Keta. but then I am a rather spiteful individual who loves to see villains utterly and completely fail and get their comeuppance.

[quote]"bluesub6":/users/603353 said: Ye I would not be surprised if he tries to kill her first and every chance he gets. Let's go over the list of reasons from his perspective: 1) made me watch my mom get raped 2) let her men rape my mom in the first place 3) murdered my father 4)burned my village to the ground 5) abducted me to turn me into a pet. let me know if I missed any! :) Also fantastic comic so far privvy! you've really done well making a villain that I can truly hate and a protagonist I am rooting for. Just like Miguels mom said I hope Keta dies a slow and painful death. And that Miguel can be reunited with his real mom. :3 [/quote] Here’s another terrifying thing you need to keep in mind: Miguel was knocked out before being abducted, never knowing for sure if his mom is still alive. In his perspective, he cannot rely on Keta to be telling him the truth. (Unless he’s dumb) For all he knows, Miguel’s mother could be raped and then brutally murdered, and he’d have no idea. And it’s probably why he didn’t ask Keta if his mom is okay. He’d rather be ignorant than to trust her words.

[quote]"bluesub6":/users/603353 said: Also fantastic comic so far privvy! you've really done well making a villain that I can truly hate and a protagonist I am rooting for. Just like Miguels mom said I hope Keta dies a slow and painful death. And that Miguel can be reunited with his real mom. :3 [/quote] Keta is a far more broken person than even she realizes. If there is going to be redemption of any sort for her, it will have to start with internalizing what she [i][b]did[/b][/i] and that her performative mothering is only making it worse for everyone... including for herself. The question is the extent to which Miguel will have any interest whatsoever in assisting with that redemption, or whether his role is to dig the grave. Is there anything, anything at all in Keta worth saving? And if so, how can Miguel be realistically convinced of that? The only path to that I see is Keta having a moment of clarity, having an utterly devastating meltdown into self-loathing, and Miguel's better nature having sympathy that is undeserved but may be granted anyway. We need to see more about Miguel to see who he really is, beyond his current status of "victim".

I feel like this is partially just the author telling furries to be more hygenic at cons. Lmao

Now I'm wondering how he washes his tail. Like it doesn't have fur so does it need to be scrubbed, or does he just soak it in a bucket? Don't know why I find this question amusing.

[quote]"bluesub6":/users/603353 said: Ye I would not be surprised if he tries to kill her first and every chance he gets. Let's go over the list of reasons from his perspective: 1) made me watch my mom get raped 2) let her men rape my mom in the first place 3) murdered my father 4)burned my village to the ground 5) abducted me to turn me into a pet. let me know if I missed any! :) Also fantastic comic so far privvy! you've really done well making a villain that I can truly hate and a protagonist I am rooting for. Just like Miguels mom said I hope Keta dies a slow and painful death. And that Miguel can be reunited with his real mom. :3 [/quote] sexually assaulted him on those first two pages iirc

Miguel looks especially cute on this page

[quote]"weaselsmasher":/users/284358 said: "Let me cling to my delusion that I'm being motherly and not truly evil. Too bad about your former mom." [/quote] Ye I would not be surprised if he tries to kill her first and every chance he gets. Let's go over the list of reasons from his perspective: 1) made me watch my mom get raped 2) let her men rape my mom in the first place 3) murdered my father 4)burned my village to the ground 5) abducted me to turn me into a pet. let me know if I missed any! :) Also fantastic comic so far privvy! you've really done well making a villain that I can truly hate and a protagonist I am rooting for. Just like Miguels mom said I hope Keta dies a slow and painful death. And that Miguel can be reunited with his real mom. :3

"Let me cling to my delusion that I'm being motherly and not truly evil. Too bad about your former mom."

Another banger of a page. I really love Miguel's expressions.

thank you for the new page