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Differences from the RP:
Axle and Tris’s part wasn’t posted in the RP, it was DMed to me by Draco. I guess he wanted to prevent spoilers from the users who weren’t too heavily involved in our characters’ adventure.
During the dust clouds, the Longhorn dragon blinked to let his eyes slightly wet themselves to shield against the dust. I didn’t take into account how thick the dust was back then.
I don’t know how to make this part understandable: “and the look on his face it was know shown that careless, non trill fight to a almost a true warrior face,”. I tried my best, but if anybody how to write it better, let me know and I’ll credit you once I get it put in.
Facts that might not be mentioned later:
According to LordDraco8967, why at the moment did Dracul wait to show up and attack Axle? Simple, Axle opened up what Dracul could not find, once Axle’s purpose was done, there was no use for him to live anymore.
Uh oh, what’s going to happen with Hex when that spell is completed? Will the Vulture Horde save her in time? Find out in Draco’s 11th giftstory next year.
Axle, Mekarth, Juna, Spinx, Dracul, Arch, Azera, Massiva, Tris, Verona, Bracer, Tomas and Zero © lorddraco8967 from Fanfiction.net
Atlas, Aeolus, Kathia, Eitri, Kekul, Enamora, Cirrus, Jarilo, Evony, Onslou, Eatorn, Volkin, Annar, Sally, Fable, Sparqus, Pixie, Todora, Hex, Vika, Kol and Bianca © me
Yopple and Ohimia (c) Randomness-Central from Deviant Art
Zeditha and Mia © Zeditha (this is her profile: https://forums.dragcave.net/index.php?showuser=209782 )
You can see the RP at this following link: http://forums.dragcave.net/index.php?showtopic=152686&st=0 )
Great War: Dragons vs Humans (c) picknick10
Story written by me
Dragon Cave (c) TJ09 (a.k.a. T.J. Lipscomb)
List of chapters
Prologue - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2059799/dragon-rage-the-first-war-prologue
Chapter 1 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2059807/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-1
Chapter 26 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2066204/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-26
Chapter 51 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2075140/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-51
Table of Giftstories - https://www.weasyl.com/submissions?userid=195211&folderid=114231
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