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Calamity was paying more attention to the wall. Abruptly he jumped to his hooves. “She’s gone. An’ if ya don’t want somethin’ horrible t’ happen t’ us, Ah suggest we be leavin’ too.” He moved to the door and pushed on the handle. It didn’t budge.
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It was locked.
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“Maybe she’s just trying to us safe from the ‘nasty things’ that haunt the fields at night?” I offered, not really believing it.
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Velvet Remedy had pushed past me to try the door herself. Now she whinnied, “Doesn’t matter. We’re leaving. I will not be locked in a cage.”
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Calamity had moved to the window and was looking down on the farm below. I reared up, putting my hooves on the ledge, and peered out through the glass. For a moment, I saw nothing. Just the night. Then, a crack of dimly pulsing, colored light appeared as Pinkie Bell pushed open the door of the barn just enough to slide through, then pushed it shut behind her.
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Calamity waited, quiet and still, until the door of the farmhouse opened, casting a rectangle of light across the ground with a Pinkie Bell shape cut out of it.
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**Fo:E - Chapter Nine:** The Moral of the Story
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**Changes made:**  In the original, Pinkie Bell enters the farmhouse (the house they're in), instead of the silo. I'll try to make it make more sense on the next page, to avoid  giving spoilers (in  case anyone  here haven't read Fo:E). This doesn't really change the story, other than to make it easier for me to draw the whole scene.
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Also, I did not draw Pinkie Bell leaving the barn, because when I drew page 12, I misread the scene on chapter 9 and made the barn behind the window view... But I intend to make Littlepip see the "dimly pulsing, colored light" in the next page.